A TORN RELATION PART 31

~A TORN RELATION~

 


PART 31

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Geet : no , you wont aap uss raat ke bare me kisi ko nahi batayenge are you listening to me … you wont tell anyone…  she was serious… and you cant lie to me I know you are going to say them everything …

 

Maan was shocked how did she knew about him … how does she know everything and does he is so much obvious does he was able to mask his feelings .. maan didn’t look at her and drove back to KM.. he knew that he shouldn’t have behaved the way he did , she only wanted the baby and he wasn’t even able to assure her of her wants and wishes , what an irony one side he is telling her that he will be with her in every second step of her life and now he is asking her that she should abort the baby ..

 

Maan looked at her with his thief eyes..he was very well aware that she was looking at him and whom he was fooling just like he care for her , his feelings were not hidden ..atleast not now same way he did affected her..

 

It was him only that she had been able to say her fears still he had to make her comfortable …

 

Geet when didn’t find any of the response from his side she doesn’t know but why she was feeling connected so much to the baby if it was the only thing left in her life..she looked at him and caught him staring at her ..she didn’t help but to look in his deep brown eyes..those were asking her the silent apology..she doesn’t know why ..why she does but she feels connected.., her husband had such effect on her..it was not just a day’s events but maan’s presence even at the starting..

 

That mean night..somehow connected them.. his animalistic behavior she didn’t didn’t forget but she still cant even forget his nurmerous attempts to make her comfortable around him in these past two months she couldn’t deny…

 

Maan averted his gaze as if he knew that she could listen his heartbeats that was giving a new meaning to his life ..she could read his eyes..she could clearly lay don his emotions she was the one who could re define him …

 

Geet : aap iss taraf aakhen nahi chura sakte hai … why don’t you answer  me .. 

 

Maan : there is no answer geet …  I just cant agree what you want..you know that my one mistake is now costing you your life.. tumhari zindagi meri wajah se .. you are not fit for this pregnancy shona…

 

Geet didn’t answer him..she just tried to feel her baby .. though she could relate to his words but some part of her life is still telling her that she shouldn’t go with his decision..she knew that her baby is alright .. last night thoughts swimmed in her mind.. she then wanted this baby to make maan realize that he had destroyed her life that was the battle between her and her rights but now it was just purely motherly feelings which are making her bounded ..

 

Though she is still young to have this , she and maan could have their family but when their relation is purely based on this thread then she doesn’t want this to let go…

 

Suddenly a speed breaker appeared and it made the car to disbalance as a result geet was discomforted .. and her hand touched the player In the car and it played…

 

Maan asked her if she was fine.. she blinked her eyes and looked outside listening to the FM…

 

” his this is RJ raj.. again with a love letter .. and doston aaj ka love letter bahut his special hai.. this is from akash to his wife charu

 

Akash ” charu I know that with my inabilities and my reserved nature I was never able to confess what I feel for you.. you were always my first love..my companion my friend infact ek aisi chahat jisesirf mehsoos kiya jata hai .. but I was never able to and will never able to say you that how much I love you.. and now when we are going to get an angel..i just cant express myself..i just want to say that thank you..thank you so much charu for coming in my life.. and now having our baby… “

 

Rj : well this was quite expressive and finally akash you confessed ..i must say akash and charu you too are lucky .. and congrats for becoming parents…

 

RJ : doston… these were the feelings of akash .. and I can just say you that there is never late in expression of heart..

 

Pyar aisa jazbaat hai jo har khata ko bhula deta hai… So don’t be late in this beautiful expression…  Rj raj signing off with “piya aaye na “

 

“Teri khata hai meri jiya…

 

Teri khata hai meri jiya…

 

Unpe bharosa kyun tune kiya…”

 

Geet who was engrossed in the cute moment of the love letter was suddenly disturbed with the lyrics..and her mind went towards maan..was it her mistake is she trusting the wrong person again… she tried to shut her feelings but her vulnerable heart was not listening to her..

 

Har khata ki hoti hai koi na koi saza…

 

They reached KM.. maan opened her side and loosened her seat belt she was so engrossed still..but his one touch on her abdomen brought her back and she looked at him with her pleading eyes … asking silently …” do you still want to loose this treasure ”  and maan like knew that he couldn’t answer her ..he was the one who will make her understand .. he knew that his one sin and he and geet are going to loose the moments they should have treasured …

 

Gam like ho kismet me toh ban hi jaati wajah …

 

So true.. the conditions , the circumstances everything was against them .. their destiny was also against them … 

 

Geet : please don’t tell anyone..i don’t anyone to know what is between us..

 

Maan nodded and left but only with her …

 

Maan left to his room and he didn’t know that geet was following him.. things were not gong on their accord she doesn’t want him to let down in front of the  family..she never wanted the family to know what was between them and now she knew that it was all a weak moment , a plotting she doesn’t want anyone to blame him.. though she still someone had that hitch in her heart that why can’t her life be perfect ..she too wanted her life be normal…

 

Maan had already left the room , when she came and geet went and changed ..

 

Meanwhile at XYZ place…

 

Girl : no not this something good..i want different , and haa be its big …

 

Shopkeeper : madam can you be specific what do you want …

 

Girl : look bhaiyya , I want a good toy.no no teddy bear for my nephew .. you know I just want the best…

 

Sk: how old is he mam…

 

Girl : what do you mean how old…  its still time for him to open his eyes in this world… so I want something special for him , you know I am going to be masi for the fisrt time..

 

The other side of the shop…

 

(VICKY)

Guy : that one..

 

Sales girl : that one sir…

 

Guy : yes mam that one baby and mother teddy I want that …

 

SG: sure sir… 

 

Girl : mil gaya…( I got it ..) that one give that teddy to me  , that’s just perfect even di will like it …

 

(RADHIKA)

 

Sk : sorry mam that was only one piece and it is sold…

 

Girl : what how can it be..abhi toh wahi tha…  please bhaiyya just get it to me..and there is no other thing in this shop that I can get …

 

On the other side Vicky looked at the teddy , he just like it and he knew that it will be perfect gift to geet and it wont even annoy his bhabhi , since the baby can be boy or girl…  he was looking at it when someone came and take it from him handing him the other … and muttered something that didn’t even make him aware until the stormy girl was off…

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Next : I will give if I will get a proper response

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6 Replies to “A TORN RELATION PART 31”

  1. suhana it was superb. specially i am loving their new feelings which are coming up slowly slowly. both are trying to understand each other. it was indeed a beautiful update. waiting for next dear.

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